I was pretty upset this morning, since I had a later start than I wanted to, but when I saw how nice and sunny it is in NYC today I felt a lot better. Grabbed a good seat at Starbucks. I think my boyfriend is going to visit me soon, too.
Finally, I've gotten up to the first school dance. I'm pretty excited to finally write it, since it's been in my head since forever. Although I'm worried this chapter is a bit choppy because it goes like this:
PAGE 1-2: All dialogue between Tak, Yusuke, and Joey. Then Hoshimi is introduced.
PAGE 2-3: Shizuka and Hoshimi's father dies
PAGE 3-4: Dance starts
There aren't any transitions, really. Lots of scene breaks. But I won't know if it's that bad until I read it all over, and now I'm to excited to write more to proofread it. :)
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